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I was thinking about what people said about elegies. I think everything that is written is inspired by someone either direct or indirect. So even though an elegy is written in remembrance everything is tinged with the feeling. Every book is dedicated to family or friends. It all goes back to write what you know.

prose poems today

Marshall's story was really funny I liked the cursing part made it seem more real. I also liked Larue's idea of a romantic story, it was a different side of her. It shows her range of writing abilities.

elegy for chocolate

Now I know Chocolate is not a man or woman,but the soul is deep and dark.
It can be smooth or chunky
if it's ice cream I like creamy many layers which hide many surprises.
some nuts whipped topping or syrup give the surface depth.
Each layer helps me return to the inner me.
Think about my hopes and dreams.
the one problem is it does not help my hips.
so it is my secret passion.

free

I remember some poems of the packet from last semester. I like writing about someone as a dedication. this form scares me im not sure how to do it. I could write something about Mariah Carey she is an idol of mine.

poems today

I'm ready glad the poems were funny today. I liked Deborah's Facebook play it's funny how people actually write this stuff. It's kind of the voyeur side of us all. I don't think we mean to be curious it's just human nature. I like Shan's idea of tips for women and men about dating.

poem found

I hope I did ok with this form. My information wasn't instructions but it did include numbers. I'm sorry for the guys in class. I wasnt thinking about you when I wrote it.

open prose

I like this form because you can go anywhere with them. They are usually short and sweet and can discuss your thoughts some are deep and some have fun I like the love song of J Alfred profrock and I too America I remember this from American Lit class. Dirt and Copper is cool.

lost and found poems today

I really liked the poems by Brittany and Ashley they both used the form well. The bowling theme was interesting you know it's about bowling but the use of numbers made my mind want to guesss the rest of the story. Ashley's poem may have been cynical but it does make you think. It is true the magazines have all those lists.